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3 years ago

I need a sentence with sharecropper and windswept

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"The landlords thereupon demanded their sharecroppers to plant no indigo and, simultaneously, rising the rent."
"We stood upon the windswept ridge and gazed below at the valley below."

lisabon 2012 [21]3 years ago

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After a long day's work in the windswept fields, the exhausted sharecropper trudged home.
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My Ark Encounter

The happiest day of my life was our tour of the ark encounter.

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We went on vacation to the beautiful state of Kentucky for annual family vacation.

It was the most amazing experience we all have ever had.

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Our day started very humid and hot.

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And we where out the door by 10 in the morning.

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We arrived to Williamston Kentucky at about 11am so we we could purchase our tickets and tour information.

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Upon arrival we where amazed at how big that ark really was, but we where more shooken by the people their waiting in line.

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We found a parking spot as soon as we could, but that was a one of the biggest struggles.

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So we decided i would get off and wait in line, and my husband and kids would go find a parking spot and wait for me to get closer to the ticket booth.

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So after about an hour in line, it was time to start the adventure.

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We where all very excited.

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We waited for the tour guide and bus to take us to the ark.

When we finally got to the ark.

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I was amazed and humbled at how small we are next to God's creations.

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The kids where able to feed lambs, alpacas, lamas and so many other animals.

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