Answer:
1 - A (using the word 'and' with a comma)
2. D
Explanation:
1. Combining the two sentences using the conjuction 'and' makes more sense as it is providing additional information - since does not support the first sentences as much.
2. In order for a sentence to be parallel, the nouns must be equal - in option D there is a night (at the symphony), an evening (at a wedding) and (a visit) to an art museum.
Is there supposed to be a picture?
C. is true
A. is incorrect because you are supposed to have at least two strong reasons for your readers to agree with your claim.
B. is incorrect because ineffective support should be eliminated in the revision process of writing.
D. is incorrect (duh!) because you should do more than the bear minimum.
In an informational text/essay/ composition, the thesis statement should be placed at the end if the introduction so you give the reader the main idea you are going to develop later on.
Then you write the body paragraphs providing information to support your thesis statement. After that, you might include examples from different sources.
Finally, you state the conclusion which should be a recap of what you talked about and you should never include new information.
