Explanation on how to answer:
Read the story and figure out whats missing. Without the whole story, no one can tell you what important part is missing. Find the section that that excerpt is from and see what the differences are, or post the full story.
Direct: She was beautiful with golden brown hair and bright green eyes.
Indirect: He say me crying and he came up to me and gave me a hug.
I believe sentence number one is your answer