Answer:
You will have to explain yourself a bit more
Explanation:
I believe if you put a little bit more detail to the story you would have a great story!
Compound sentence (even though technically he also made the sentence longer)
:<span>shy, </span><span>reserved, </span><span>diffident, </span><span>inhibited, </span><span>retiring, </span><span>reticent, </span><span>reluctant, </span>shrinking; <span>hesitant, </span><span>timid, </span><span>apprehensive, </span><span>nervous, </span><span>wary, </span><span>demure, </span><span>coy, </span><span>blushing</span>
