Question

Is this right?

Answer 1

Answer:

In the afternoon, I'm going out with my family. We buy things and then we eat. In the House, I practice guitar and study French. I bathe and go to sleep.

this is what is written.

it sounds and looks grammatically correct.

Answer 2

Bonjour

L'après-midi, je sors avec ma famille. --> "dans" is not necessary

Nous achetons des choses et ensuite nous mangeons. --> CORRECT

À la maison, je joue de la guitare et j'étudie le français.

Je prends un bain (bath) OR "je me d  o u c h e" (shower) et je vais dormir (me coucher).

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