Question

Rewrite the following paragraph, adding conjunctions and prepositions that make the sentences easier to read.

Answer 1

When August came, we needed extra money. So we sold the old tractor and some roosters. Harvest time came and we worked hard, but we still couldn't get all the corn in. First frost came and the corn was harvested. We picked apples and made cider, even though harvest time is so hard. We all worked together to get the job dont, that felt good.

Answer 2

By August, we needed extra money, so we sold the old tractor and some roosters. When harvest time came, we worked hard, but we couldn’t get all the corn in before the first frost. After the corn was harvested, we picked apples and made cider from them. Harvest time is hard, but we all worked together and that felt good.