It’s great but you used too many commas in the first paragraph. Split it into sentences with periods so the flow is smooth.
Definition of Rising Action. Rising action in a plot is a series of relevant incidents that create suspense, interest, and tension in a narrative. In literary works, a rising action includes all decisions, characters' flaws, and background circumstances that together create turns and twists leading to a climax.
To begin with,
To start off,
First,
(Launch straight into facts)
It is certain,
Clearly,
It is said that,
The facts are clear,
This essay/paragraph explores/discusses,
For starters,
I need a little bit more than that...
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