Question

How did Corporal Sherwood narrowly escape injury or death? (Quote posted below)

Answer 1

He climbed out of the trench and made his way carefully back to the clumped bushes where the kitchen was.

Answer 2

Corporal had climbed out of the trench proceeding his way discreetly into the clumped bushes, as to where the kitchen was located.

Make sure to put it into your own words to avoid plagiarism.