Legendary jazz drummer Joe Morello was vision impaired however, he had a talent for hearing and feeling rhythm. what is wrong wi

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sleet_krkn [62]

2 years ago

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Legendary jazz drummer Joe Morello was vision impaired however, he had a talent for hearing and feeling rhythm. what is wrong wi

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kogti [31] · Answer 1 · 2022-08-07T21:46:14+03:00

Answer:

The sentence can be corrected in the following way:

Legendary jazz drummer Joe Morello was vision impaired. However, he had a talent for hearing and feeling rhythm.

Explanation:

A longer pause is necessary after the first idea is expressed, since it is a long one in that particular sentence. The connective "however" usually appears at the beginning of a sentence in order to express contrast.

Romashka [77] · Answer 2 · 2022-08-07T20:38:50+03:00

Romashka [77]2 years ago

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<span> A semicolon should precede the conjunctive adverb.</span>