Question

Is this a good conclusion sentence? In conclusion, the narrator is guilty and insane because he killed someone because of their eye.

Answer 1

Answer:

actually, what you should put is something more neutral. so instead of saying and insane because he killed someone because of their eye, it would be a good idea to make it more refined.

Explanation:

it is important to use higher level academic sentence structure in all writing. Hope this is helpful:)