Revision literally means to “see again” or to basically see something again from a fresh and critical perspective. One of the best things to do during the revision stage is to have someone else proof read the material for you.
Why I should get my phone back.
First of all, Mother, I am extremely sorry for cursing, and I will never do it again, it was a horrendous idea and I was not being intelligent at all. Now the reasons I believe I deserve to get my phone back. First, I have been exceptional and not cursing. I have not said a single curse word since I have gotten my phone taken away, and plan on never saying another one. I have learned my lesson about not swearing. Another reason I should get my phone back is that I have been listening to you you said. I have not texted or called anyone while I have been home alone, nor did I even think about it. Finally, I should get my phone back because I have been doing my school work also. I have finished all of my work, and I sincerely believe I have done well on them. I hope this essay has persuaded you.
I can't tell you which one is the answer since I don't have the text, but read through the passage, and think about how the announcer cutting into the "regular programing" makes you feel. Does it add suspense, annoyance, frustration or confusion?
Answer:He is reading a book about women.
