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nata0808 [166]
3 years ago
13

I just started writing this story and I wanna know your guy's thoughts on it please be nice and no negative comments.

English
1 answer:
kvv77 [185]3 years ago
8 0
Hey! It’s a great start but the words, kill, killed, killer are overused.
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