Question

Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience.
Rewrite this dull sentence to make it dazzling.

Nathan listened to music.

Answer 1

The processes described in the question show how can we expand the sentence from many different aspects. Nathan listened to music is a given sentence. We can add information regarding when Nathan listened music, how he was listening, what was he listening to and what was his purpose. A possible example is: Nathan was listening to pop music on Saturdays while he was relaxing.

Answer 2

Previous sentence: "Nathan listened to music."

New Sentence: Nathan enjoyed listening to today's popular melodies because of its favorable frequencies and pitch that made him dance and jump around his house.

I hoped this helped in brightening the sentence and more fun to read.