Read the passage underlined (5). There may be a mistake in punctuation, capitalization, or spelling. If you find a mistake choos
e the answer that corrects the mistake. If there is no mistake, choose ‘Correct as is.’ A) Correct as is.
B) After leaving UCLA his senior year, Robinson enlisted in the U.S. Army
C) After leaving UCLA his senior year; Robinson enlisted in the U.S. Army
D) After leaving UCLA, his senior year Robinson enlisted in the U.S. Army
The reason I do not believe it is C is that: "After leaving UCLA his senior year" Is not a complete thought. Nor does the sentence have linking words like, however, furthermore, despite, etc.
D is not right because there is no reason to have a break between "UCLA" and "his senior year".