The primary theme of “The terrific Gatsby” is that the fantastic imagine American is dead. The American dream is specified by people as “The belief that everybody in the United States has the opportunity to be successful, rich, and delighted if they work hard sufficient”.
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Subjunctive mood is the answer
I think you should say “she accepted her invitation” instead of request. Maybe a little more background story? Unless you’re gonna make it into like a detective story where the short story makes a bigger picture. Maybe instead of her getting lost so soon, she meets up a friend, they both get lost, eventually meet the clown. You did great I like it so far, but its the little details that add that pizzaz. Ex: At that moment Samantha had realized her mistake, as she spent the time trick or treating the sky grew dark and ominous, a feeling like she had never felt before, true fear.