If I like it: Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief, and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better: I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.
Answer:
Hang out with friends and family
Try new food
The concept of compare and contrast is to take two unlike things and compare similarities and contrast differences.
Examples: t-chart, venn diagram
