1answer.
Ask question
Login Signup
Ask question
All categories
  • English
  • Mathematics
  • Social Studies
  • Business
  • History
  • Health
  • Geography
  • Biology
  • Physics
  • Chemistry
  • Computers and Technology
  • Arts
  • World Languages
  • Spanish
  • French
  • German
  • Advanced Placement (AP)
  • SAT
  • Medicine
  • Law
  • Engineering
nikklg [1K]
2 years ago
6

I have a poem and I need to know what I can fix on it and what you think grabbed your heart or what would be better to do that..

it is called Sun-burns... thanks brainly.
Have you found your sun
Does he light your life but leave when he is done
Is his smile so strong
That he leaves you so so stunned Do you try to get closer but end up getting burned
Do you try to hug him longer
But he leaves you days done
That’s what happens when you meet a sun
Nothing there when day is done
And if you get to close
You wined up with nothing but sunburns
That’s why we say Sun-Burns
He’s not here to stay
But WE need him any way
But that’s why we say love hurts
To close you’ll go blind
To far you’ll end in the night
You tried to make him stay
But end up with nothing but HIS Sunburns and the night

This is about when you have to be just friends. He makes you smile but WE can’t have him. And it hurts, falling in love with him but he can’t stay. I wish your sun will see you tomorrow and he realizes he isn’t your sun and want to be more. Greatest of luck thanks. AND THIS I GET EXTRA CREDIT FOR, SO DO NOT FLAG IT THAT IS MAKING ME MAD.
English
1 answer:
AVprozaik [17]2 years ago
3 0

Answer:

This is such a pretty poem and I love it. I think where it says: That he leaves you so so stunned Do you try to get closer but end up getting burned

you should make that 2 lines, cut it off after the word stunned.

I also think that on the last line you should say in the night instead of and the night. Overall though this poems is amazing!

You might be interested in
Write an informative essay on the Great Chicago Fire. Your essay will use research to explain what caused the fire to burn out o
elena-s [515]

Answer:

Following are the solution to this question:

Explanation:

In the major Chicago fire, which has been supposed to behave started with such a cow turning over even a lamp, compounded either by lack of water to expel the town's fires or floods alongside high winds. All that could go wrong and did so, all burnt to the ground except for the liquid and sump pump throughout Chicago, that endured all as they had water covered with woolen clothes and ships soaked in salt.

4 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
Which BEST explains why the Shimerdas have Krajiek live with them?
JulijaS [17]

Answer:B

Explanation:

4 0
3 years ago
She was floored by the realization that her parents wanted her to quit gymnastics.
zhenek [66]

Answer:

D

Explanation:

floored is shocked.

4 0
2 years ago
Read 2 more answers
mantenhas were important connections between separated _________ family members they still are. A.and B.but C.or D.unless
BigorU [14]

Answer:

The answer is and

Explanation:

i done the same lesson on iready

8 0
2 years ago
Make a conversation between two people about the situation of odering a product on phone
Helga [31]

Answer:

me: Hello may I please order a phone?

her: Yes which phone would you like?

me: the newest iphone would be good.

her: follow me, the iphone 12 will be $1200

me: This looks good thank you very much

Explanation:

3 0
2 years ago
Other questions:
  • The narrator is the __________ of the story.
    11·2 answers
  • What kind of clause is whom Mr stein<br> chose
    12·1 answer
  • A student wants to include the following quotation: "Normally, tusklessness would occur only in about 2 to 4 percent of female A
    8·1 answer
  • What can be inferred from the political cartoon in the passage?
    11·1 answer
  • From “The Raven” by Edgar Allen Poe Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary, Over many a quaint and curiou
    14·1 answer
  • What does Falling action mean
    6·1 answer
  • Making Inferences from Implicit Details
    7·2 answers
  • Read the excerpt from “The Monkey's Paw.”
    5·2 answers
  • What's the main role of the backbone in a vertebrate?
    7·1 answer
  • How does Hansberry challenge African American stereotypes in the play?
    14·1 answer
Add answer
Login
Not registered? Fast signup
Signup
Login Signup
Ask question!