- Make sure the story line is clear !! And the characters and how their personality
- use interesting language
- plot twist
- use a variety of sentence types
- detailed description of places, or yourself
- make sure you don’t put a lot of pressure on yourself to finish it or if something goes wrong while you are writing .
A. Wolfson, Elijah. “Newsweek Names a Mars Crater.” Newsweek. Newsweek, 28 Feb. 2014. Web. 1 Mar. 2014.
B. Herman, Barbara. “Where’s the Fire?” Newsweek. Newsweek, 24 Oct. 2013. Web. 25 Feb. 2014.
D. “A Mighty Girl.” N.p., n.d. Web. 26 Feb. 2014.
Base on my research, the reason why the Expository writing include more than just a fact, its because, it also need and evidence that could support the fact. I hope you are satisfied with my answer and feel free to ask for more if you have questions and further clarifications
Features that make this passage informal are:
a.) expression of subjective feelings - It's the way I make them.
c.) incomplete sentences - beat with a wire whisk. Done.
e.) first-person point of view - use of I.
