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DIA [1.3K]
3 years ago
6

Can someone please help me edit this paragraph and write a better conclusion. :))

English
1 answer:
erica [24]3 years ago
5 0

Answer: It is pretty good overall but try not to repeat yourself so much. Whenever you make a point then there isn't really any need to say it again but good work

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