I think the reason why the summary need to be revised is : C. the summary lacks transitions that connect ideas
For example, we need to add transition between -enkai wanted to save his cattle- and -He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth-
Answer:
"Why, when you're fifteen things won't look at all the way they did when you were ten."
Explanation:
This line shows that Alec thinks Milo's perspective will change as he grows up.
Answer:
It's difficult to read with the spacing but, I'm pretty sure the first sentence has the strongest verbs and nouns.
Explanation:
Answer:
A
Explanation:
If you read sentence 3, you'll see that it says "a bunch." This is very informal. D could've been a contender, but it was needlessly wordy and it made the paper hard to read. So, A is the correct choice. :)
