I think your essay is wonderful! You said your opinion in your first paragraph, then stated why in the next ones. Also the big if is pretty cool. Keep on writing essays and lapses will be corrected. Try to proofread and check the spelling so that it will be better.
Answer:
Dangle
Explanation:
Droop, hold, and to suspend someones feet into a pool are all words that sound awkward. Dangle is the most sensible answer.
I'd choose "revise the structure of your essay by making the progression more logical."
Out of all the given answers that one makes most sense
Answer:
i am so sorry i would love to help i don't understand <3
Explanation: