The excerpt has the characteristics of a 'Neoclassical' poem, including its usage of 'heroic couplets' and its 'elevated' style of language.
What do you mean? Is there a passage or are you asking how to prevent them.. if you need to know how to prevent i’d do a google search ;D
Answer:
Adding more compound sentences.
Explanation:
It seems like the best answer. If not, changing the sentence patterns also is a pretty good answer.