A rhetorical question is of course there are those who argue that Hector's numerous other victories make him a candidate for the greatest Trojan. here I use Repetition, But I strongly disagree with this. my Opinions given as fact is Hector's armies led him to victory. I would like imply the applicable imperatives here and declare that Hector hid shamefully behind his soldiers and barely faced battle himself. making use of the emotive language of sheer admiration, being thrilled and feeling immense prouder, not using hyperbole announces that Whereas Paris looked his enemy in the eye like a courageous leader should and offered his life to spare the lives of others. Appealing directly to the reader Did Hector ever make such a selfless offer.
Change all the condensed words like wasn’t to was not to make it appear longer. try to give your own point of view and a conclusion sentence and why you chose what u chose
