If you're overusing exclamation points in your writing, you're making it seem a bit to exciting, and will have to much of an enthusiastic tone. Thus the readers will be confused.
there were no child labors laws nor working unions the rights of employees were at the mercy of what was needed and inexistent. The industrial revolution was a very contaminated and polluted dark smoky dirty ashy and sick period of history. Another hardship especially for coal miners was the same thing we have now. implosion in short terms it is a combination of physical & emotional pollution that took over many lives.
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He is passively accepting his fate
Paul Revere’s fame as a hero of the American Revolution has been passed down from generation to generation through Henry Wadsworth Longfellow’s poem, “Paul Revere’s Ride.” Revere’s midnight ride before the 1775 Battles of Lexington and Concord warned American soldiers that the British were coming to attack them. But what was his life like before and after that glorious event? James Cross Giblin tells Revere’s story from birth to death in this richly illustrated narrative.
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