Dear (whatever their name is), some important things about getting an education is if you wanted a job and to get that job you needed a high school diploma or needed to go to college and study to get the job you couldn't get the job because you dropped out or let's say you had a child and they need help on their homework but you don't know it because you dropped out
i did two reasons you do the third and i hope this helps =w=
Look back at your thesis statement and see if you have included all that information in you concluding sentence.
The plural possessive form of <em>women</em> is women's. This is because women is already the plural form of woman and to make it possessive you simply need to add the apostrophe "s".