1 Good child care centers are clean and safe, hire trained staff, and have enough staff for the number of children. 2 These ar
e three important considerations for single parents and working couples who need day care for their children. 3 Every day in this country, at least ten million children go to day care. 4 Many parents feel guilty that they can't stay at home to take care of their children. 5 But good day care is available if parents take the time to investigate. Which sentence in this introduction would be more effective if the writer used it as an opening sentence?
A. sentence 4, because it uses guilt to draw readers into the essay
B. sentence 5, because it wraps up the ideas in the paragraph
C. sentence 2, because it states the number of considerations up front
D. sentence 3, because it grabs the reader's attention with a startling statistic
Sentence 3 grabs the reader's attention with a startling fact: ten million kids is a lot of kids! After reading that statistic, the reader is likely to want to continue reading.
D. sentence 3, because it grabs the reader's attention with a startling statistic.
Explanation:
This is the sentence that would best be used as an introduction to this text. When we write the opening sentence of a paragraph, we often want to use a "hook." A hook is a statement that is attractive or interesting and convinces the reader to continue reading. In this case, the interesting fact is the statistic. This statistic grabs the reader's attention, and thus is best employed at the beginning of the paragraph.
C. transformation because the excerpt contains words like "turned" and "metamorphosed", which insinuates that the character is undergoing a change in form or nature.