You could write a sketch for a story about say, a a homeless kid who wants to be like the rich kid he meets because of his shoes but when they switch body's he becomes paralyzed like the rich boy was. Will that work for you? I hope it helped
You mind sending me the paragraph in the text they talking about ?
Answer:
it changes hw the reader veiws the stspeech becaus e f their tne
Explanation:
this is super great, my only suggestion is to combine sentences, because I feel like your paragraph is very chunky.
(: it's awesome!