Wordiness
The word "sometimes" eliminates the need for "every now and then," making the sentence wordy.
The poem "Musée des beaux arts" by W.H. Auden was written as a response to Pieter Brueghel's "Landscape with the Fall of Icarus".
In this poem, Auden alludes to the human indiference towards other people's misfortune.
In the first section of the poem, Auden shows how humans go around not caring and paying little attention to the suffering in the world. According to Auden, neither children nor animals have enough sympathy to understand someone else's plight. But adults remain uninterested in individual calamity.
In the second section of the poem, Auden refers to Brueghel's paiting, by describing specific images of this dismissal of external suffering. How the ploughman "<em>may</em>" have heard the splash and how, for him, it was not an important failure.
You could start it with a question.
Like... “Is it right for a certain book to be banned because of a valid reason?” Or “Is it right to ban ANY sort of book from the public?”
Make the reader want to continue reading. Your thesis is supposed to catch the attention of someone.
I hope this helps. Let me know if you need more ideas!
~Brooke❤️
You could write a sketch for a story about say, a a homeless kid who wants to be like the rich kid he meets because of his shoes but when they switch body's he becomes paralyzed like the rich boy was. Will that work for you? I hope it helped
