-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer: Please see explanation for answer
Explanation:
Match the description to the character. we have
1. magician --------Merlin
2. Arthur's father ----Uther Pendragon
3. Kay's Father-------Sir Ector
4. Sir Ector's son----- Kay
5. carried away by Merlin ----- Arthur
The above are among the most important characters in the Arthurian legend.
Arthur's birth father, King Uther Pendragon gave him away to Merlin at birth due to the troubled times faced during the birth of Arthur. Merlin is a wise magician who advised that the Arthur be raised in a secret place to hide his identity, and later was Arthur's advisor.Kay is the foster brother to the young Arthur, and the son to Sir Ector who was Arthur's guardian and adoptive father. Kay was known to be a bully while growing up but in later years when Arthur ascended the throne, became one of his trusted knights and steward as he proved loyalty to Arthur.
Answer: A. The hunter cannot catch the deer
