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Answer:
The inclusion of reputable sources and specific facts
Explanation:
"This is because school uniforms allow students and their parents to save money and time." - A school uniform can cost more money than "normal" clothing. Perphaps a direct number would be good here (the average cost of a uniform vs the average cost of the equivalent amount in normal clothing). The next sentence could tie into this depending on what you were to find statistically.
"Uniforms may stifle students’ self-expression, but there are many other ways to reveal one’s individuality at school." - Mentioning a specific example of where a student has or students have expressed individuality would be helpful here.
Answer: 5/10 | I really liked your story! I think you should write more about how the sisters find the spellbook and where the evil jester goes when she is banished. You should also give all the characters formal names. You need to have more of a plot. Instead of saying "Then gradully the sisters secretly continue to send messages to each other and end up finding the location of the spellbook." You could say " When (Name) was banished, (Name2) sent her a message. 'I'm ready to find the spellbook', the message read." You need to add more dialogue. You should also check your spelling as I noticed several mistakes. You should add events leading up to the death of the king and queen. You could also give some information about the backstory of how the General's daughters are asked to come to the castle. I liked your story but overall you need
- Dialogue
- Formal names
-Plot, rising action, falling action
- Backstory
-Setting
-Spellcheck
Explanation:
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