The above question wants to analyze your writing skill. Also, you have not provided the text that should be edited. For these reasons, it is not possible to answer your question, but I will show you how to answer it.
First, you will need to read all the text and sentences to which the question refers. This reading must be able to point out elements of the text that must be edited, as they do not promote exact meaning, deviate from grammatical rules, and do not promote fluid and optimized reading.
During your editing, you should pay attention to the textual structure, which is the order in which the information in the text is presented. You must also identify whether the use of passive and active voice is correct.
<h3>Correct use of passive and active voice</h3>
- Passive voice: The subject does not promote the action of the verb, but suffers this action. Ex: The wall is painted by Dan.
- Active voice: The subject promotes the action of the verb. Ex: Dan is painting the wall.
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She's ready to break the law because the free "people" (animals) among the jungle don't stand up and speak their minds. Her motivation is purely within the fact that none of the "free people" speak against the ruler or the rules of the jungle in fear that something bad will happen to them.
My heart is happily singing,
Whos cuddling on the couch,
My heart is full
Like fruit on a tree
My heart is loving
who is nonstop
My heart is happier than the rest,
Because I have my love
Mechanical Hound, Professor Faber, Granger, Stoneman and Black, Mrs Phelps and Mrs. Bowles.
Answer:
being a slave for someone and childrens trading and cannot leave there job and do not control over there money and working long hrs.
