I had the most wonderful day ever. First and foremost, I awoke. After then, I received a parcel in the mail. It was opened by me. It was the best present I'd ever received. After that, my aunt arrived with a birthday cake and party favours. All of my pals showed there, and we had a great time. This is a day I'll never forget.
Since this is a poem and you have a comma after river bank, the answer would be Halting because it is starting a new line. River should not be capitalized in this sentence because it is not a proper noun. It is just a common noun.
O clock should be o' clock, would'nt should be wouldn't, and "whomever was in the know," is messed up
Korean families have a tradition to arrange their children's wedding. In this story the Korean family is shown as gold diggers as they are looking for an eligible husband for their daughter, but they don't pay attention to what their daughter wants.
The father rat is very selfish and adamant to his decision. He should ask his daughter about her preference and money is always not the only factor that can keep you happy.
