My family and I visited USA a while back to visit my cousins , it was really fun
We visited Disney land , which was so cool .we rode on many rides and rollercoasters .we also played fun games .in Disneyland I took photos with many characters like Mickey Mouse and goofey,I also met Disney princesses like jasmine,belle and sleeping beauty
Then we visited a trampoline park ,which is an area with many trampolines all lined together, it was so cool to jump on the trampolines I learnt to do a front flip!
We also went to a concert of a famous American rock and roll band called greenday it’s my new favorite.their songs were great but there was so much crowd in the stadium ,and we became all sweaty .i. Could barely even see them because of so many people ,and everyone was shouting !!
America is a really fun place to visit ,they have many fast food restaurants ,and we especially enjoyed mcdonalds and Wendy’s .i would defianetly recommend visiting
Answer:
at the start of each month
Explanation:
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
I believe the answer is opium
