It looks really good but I think you should put a comma before ( like ) and I suggest to take the ( grave or ) part because it will sound a lot more better
The psychotherapy that addresses "the whole person" is the so-called humanistic psychotherapy. Instead of trying to point fingers at specific problems in an individual's life, it assumes a holistic view, taking the person as a whole instead of focusing on their particular aspects. Its goal is to empower the individual and strengthen their belief in themselves, as well as other people.
are both Japanese poems that indicate different kinds related syllables
