I'm sure its the first one. I haven't really read the poem in a while but i can easily tell by how it's spoken.
A has a Prepositional Phrase.
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A. Transportation planner Sarah Reidel believes that companies need to encourage employees to take alternate means of transportation, telecommute when possible, and work abbreviated schedules.
Parallel structure is when there is a consistent use of the same grammatical structure. This is especially important when writing a list. In the sentence, the author lists the three things companies can do to help with the transportation problem. The verb structure needs to be the same. Option A is the only choice that has a similar verb structure for encourage, telecommute and work. Other options vary the verb structure sometimes using verbs that end in -ing while others do not. These do not have parallel structure.
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I think you should switch to Sila's POV. One thing that might be fun to add is how she (maybe, theoretically, if you want to) got shivers/goosebumps when Seth helped her out of the pond. Or how she could feel Seth's eyes on her as she fed the ducks. Or how she could sense that he was withholding information about her (the family stuff), she could tell that he was biting his tounge about something. Or a comment on the nickname "prettyboy". I would love to see the car scene, and maybe a sweatshirt could be given to dry <em>someone</em> off. You could describe Seth's car and how it's (pick a quality) reflects or is the opposite of how Seth acts. Another thing about love stories is the smell of someone you like is a smell you like..
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i'm honestly very interested in this story and I hope you keep writing it!! :)
