This paragraph lacks sentence variety because the writer, started sentence after sentence the <em>same way</em>. didn't include structure with proper legth or that provides emphasis. <em>Prepositional phrase, adverbial clause, adverbs</em> (absolutely; naturally) or some<em> connective</em> (therefore; and; besides etc) are great help to <em>avoid monotony.</em>
Answer:standing in the rain watching it fall like salt on desert,and smelling the heat off the pavement like the fog left a warm dryer sheet smell over the road,as I walk down the road my squeaky rubber boots plunge into the tiny ocean under my feet and fly up like everything’s in reverse
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I believe that youth sports have become too intense. Many kids today play extracurricular sports starting at a young age, exposing them to athletic injuries. Youth sports include soccer, basketball, lacrosse, and even wrestling. Those sports are only examples of the sports available to kids today. Sports can cause minor and major injuries, and although it is called "youth" sports, the rules are still the same. Competitiveness can lead to kids accidentally injuring each other. The intenseness of youth sports can also burn out the passion and motivation for the sport, as it is too stressful for some kids. In fact, 7 out of 10 kids who play organized sports quit by age 13, according to the National Alliance for Youth Sports. Youth sports have become too intense as it may be too stressful for children and can cause injuries.
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Man this a hard one. But I would go with C.
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Alliteration uses similiar sounds at the beginning of words. Slipped and sudden both have s sounds.
