Answer:
I can help, i love writing especially songs. Here are a few suggestions for lyrics :) They aren't going to be as good right now because it is late but if you still need help in the morning ( Its 8:38 pm here and i woke up at 4) then i would be glad to help :)
Lyrics i made:
I feel like i'm searching a forbidden path
walking and walking but i think im trapped
the voices and secrets they get to my head
do they see it when i lie?
when i say that i'm alright
can they tell how long i've been looking?
i fall deep into this hole
still i keep searching slowly loosing hope
A few things you could correct:
" I barely know myself ( who am i?) so how can i know if the answers i find are real?" could possibly be changed to " If i dont even know who i am how can i know if the answers wont lead me down the wrong path?"
" So many things have changed yet it all feels the same" could be changed to " Everything is different but the rest stays the same"
The novel itself has managed to generate such controversy due to the general language, violence, and sexual references included within the story.
If you add ly to lone then its going to say lonely.
