Question

Would this be a good thesis statement for informing people about parasites and what they are what they do and how the transfer into a host and how the developed and how to treat and prevent them? heres my statement:
"People all around the world should be informed about what parasites are, what they do, how they transfer into a host, how they are developed, and how to prevent and treat them".?

Answer 1

Can we have a link to the story,passage or whatever it is is because this question is impossible to answer unless they new the passage
Plz

Answer 2

Seems great. Try to keep it simple for people to understand.