Answer:
The phrase that makes this thesis statement wordy is: electronic mail.
Explanation:
Wordiness refers to making something longer than it should be, that is, using too many words to express something. In the case of the thesis statement we are analyzing here, all words seem to be necessary with the exception of the final phrase. As we know, "electronic mail" is no longer an expression in use. It's been decades since it has been replaced by the shorter version "email", "e" standing for "electronic". Not only does using "electronic mail" make the sentence wordy, it also makes it sound old-fashioned.
<span>Narrative poetry is a form of poetry which tells a story, often making use of the voices of a narrator and characters as well; the entire story is usually written in metered verse. The poems that make up this genre may be short or long, and the story it relates to may be complex.</span>
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Football and hockey is an incomplete sentence because there is no verb.
I think that the answer to <em>"What could Mrs. Louis do next to be an effective participant in this discussion?"</em> is <em>"C"</em> or <em>"D"</em> which is......
<em>"C." "Move on to the next topic of conversation to keep the discussion on track
."</em>
<em>"D." "Challenge the validity of the report by questioning Mr. Hollembeak’s research methods."</em>
