The error in the sentence that should be corrected while revising is the run-on sentence.
A run-on sentence has at least two parts, both of which can stand by themselves. For example, we could say, "The ship was enormous." and "Its mast was almost 40 feet high." Both sentences are correct. In order to correct the run-on sentence, we could separate the two sentences with a period (like shown earlier) or we can add a semi-colon, so the sentence would read, "The ship was enormous; its mast was almost 40 feet high.
It is possible to have too much of a good thing because sometimes we can’t handle good things all the time. So I do agree that we can possibly have too much of something and not know how to appreciate it.
since we cant see the passage, i can tell you what it is. an onomatopoeia is a sound made into a word. so words like bam, honk, and animal sounds are onomatopoeia's
