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Hey yall I had to write a myth in English I was wondering if you guys would read it and tell me your thoughts thank you so much in advanced I promise I will make it worth your while.
The Myth about why we are born and why we die by Makayla B.
Hello fellow readers, I am writing this myth about why we are born and why we die. The setting of the story takes place in Pennsylvania, in a small cottage off of the water. I will introduce you to Makayla, Zach, Jayden, and Jacob. Makayla I really happy and cherry and she will talk your ear off. Zach is Makayla’s dad, Jayden is Makayla’s mom, and Jacob is Makayla’s brother. It all started when Makayla saw her brother die the she started asking questions like why do we die and how are we born. Makayla has an Internal conflict and what she faces is that she wonders why we are born and how we die. Makayla starts figuring out why we are born but she doesn’t yet figure out why we die. There are 3 things that make this story suspenseful. She gets closer to finding out why we die or so she thinks. She goes into her great grandma’s room and finds her Great grandpa’s journal that he used to write things in (Mainly questions as to why we are born and why we die). Makayla gets really sick and Jayden and Zach rush Makayla to the hospital it turned out that it was just the flu but Makayla had a near death experience, that she would remember forever. Makayla went back into her great grandma’s room and she took the journal and she started reading it. The element I am describing is Life and Death. She found so many answers that she would treasure forever and would keep hold of.

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This is a really nice myth. I could picture it in my mind with the words you used.

Answer 2

I really love the idea of your myth and I feel like you get the point across really well.