Answer:
Sorry I can write an essay but it has to be your unforgettable day!!
I can give you ideas to make it easier!
Paragraph 1: Write an interesting hook. For ex: A bright sunshine, birds singing, beautiful clouds, A family day at the beach. Then write how you and you family got started packing and write the funny parts of it.
Paragraph 2: Body Paragraph: Write how the family got to the beach and how did it feel to pack up together. Also write did you have to pack in 2 cars or did everyone have to squish each other.
Paragraph 3: Body Paragraph: Write when you got to the beach were you reliefed that you left the car? Also how was playing and swimming with your family members? Give it in details.
Paragraph 4: Body Paragraph: Write what fun activities did you do with your family. Was that the first time you learned to swim? Did you build a sandcastle? What was fun and did you forget anything at home important or not?
Paragraph 5: Conclusion: Write in details the negative part of it and the most fun which is the climax. Also write how was it an unforgettable day. Also what did you learn. For ex: Things are more fun with family, or you learned how to swim thanks to you family members.
Remember:
- Details
- Grammar
- Main Points
- Mention every character
- Was it a certain day. For Ex: Summer weekend Vacation {off school
- make sure you want to make the reader read it more and more to see how much more intense and funny parts are there okay?
I hope this helps, it took me a full 40 minutes on this no exaggeration. Plzzz give me brainliest!
