Question

Rewrite the following paragraph adding conjunction and preposition that make the sentence easier to read: August came we need extra money we sold the old tractor we sold some roosters harvest time came we worked hard we couldn’t get all the corn in first frost came the corn was harvest we pick apples we made cider harvest time is hard we work together we felt good. How would I rewrite it?????

Answer 1

August came. We needed extra money, so we sold the old tractor and some roosters. Harvest time came, and we worked hard. We couldn't get all the corn in before first frost came, but the corn was harvested. We picked apples and we made cider. Harvest time is hard, but we work together. We felt good!

Answer 2

Answer:

The answer is:

August came. We need extra money so we sold the old tractor and also we sold some roosters, then harvest time came, we worked hard but we couldn’t get all the corn, in first frost came the corn was harvest so we pick apples and  we made cider harvest time, although is hard, we work together and we felt good.

Explanation:

Conjuctions are words used to connect clauses or sentences, and prepositions is a word that expresses the relation to another word in the text. In your example it is very confusing, as you have a mix of grammar tenses which makes it complicated to only add conjuctions and preposition, nevertheless, I added some punctuation as well that could make it easier to understand. The underlines words are the conjuctions and prepositons.