The balloon rocketed into the sky. Though we were frightened, everything ended up being fine.
- The word "quickly" can be removed because speed is implied with the word "rocketed"
- The phrase "into the really cold air" can be removed because it is irrelevant to what's happening. It can be replaced by "into the sky"
- Now "up" can be removed because "into the sky" implies that the balloon went upwards.
- Either the word "scared" or "frightened" can be removed because they're synonyms (I chose to remove "scared")
- "Because it was moving really fast" can be removed because the use of the word "rocketed" beforehand already implies that the balloon was moving fast.
- Lastly , I just reworded and conjoined some of the sentences to make them read more clearly though this isn't necessary. (I changed the third sentence from "However, it was all good in the end," to "everything ended up being fine." I also combined the second and third sentences, adding "though" in front of the second sentence to make it a dependent clause)
I don't know what your options are but from my experience I have to go with faithfulness and/or loyalty.
Hope this helps!
-Payshence
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Ogadi's life always seemed to take a turn for the worse. Born in Umuneke, a remote African village, to a father and forced to live with Onome, a wicked stepmother, Ogadi thought life couldn't be worse. She quickly found out how wrong she was when she was plucked out of Umuneke and thrown into the city. Amidst the painful feelings of bitterness, sorrow, poverty, blackmail and joyful celebration, the mysteries surrounding poor Ogadi's past, present and future is revealed by the author.
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If the question is from the story 'THE FUN THAT THEY HAD' the answer is :
Margie is 11 years and Tommy is a boy of 13
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Significant, great, important
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