Question

This is what I have for my paper so far can someone peer review it?

Answer 1

Looks really good but change the us to either the United States or the U.S.

Answer 2

Great job on this paper! In the 3rd paragraph I would just look at that first sentence again. rewrite the sentence to make the reader recall what you are talking about "Before we go to what happened after_______,we need to look at what happened to ____ after the bombing"
That way it shows your instructor/ teacher you are a good writer that reiterates.
Good job!