The second one. As it doesn’t use “I” language, and is general
The answer that is a collective noun is cattle.
A collective noun refers to numerous entities, and cattle can refer to many cows, for example. You cannot say cattles, which is another way to think of collective nouns - they don't have plural form.
The character is very daring to come out of her house and step into thick fog. The character is unaware what is outdoors within the thick fog, this could be something dangerous but she is very confident to step outside of her safe home into a dangerous place. This symbolises that the character is very daring to step into danger.
Hope this makes sense :)
Answer:
Looks good
Explanation:
Nothing needs to be chanegd.