A more natural and efficient way to run (last one)
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first there is no article so I are supposed to know about which text evidence
Mountains is capitalized incorrectly
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Maybe start it with a fact. Like something shocking about how much plastic pollution there is in the ocean. It needs to attract your audience.
Ex. Did you know that there may now be around 5.25 trillion macro and microplastic pieces floating in the open ocean?
