Corrected:
This paper provides a summary of evidence on changes in cycling and physical activity in five towns following the first phase of the Department for Transport cycling investment programme between October 2012 and February 2017. It draws on three separately published volumes of evidence<u>: </u>Demonstration Towns monitoring report, 2012-17<u>: </u>Public Opinion Results, 2009-17<u>; </u>and Cycling Demonstration Surveys of Physical Activity, 2005-17.
I gave an explanation of the usage of semicolons and colons in another question you had, so I won't repeat it again, but still let me know if you have any questions!
Can anazlye your writing style and improve it by using a variety of sentence patterns
Answer:
He might mean in a very passionate way but with some rage.
Or:
In the second stanza he talks about rage and passion, I think that he maybe tried to say that he hates someone or something rages him with a passion, that he like that this thing rages him.
