Answer:
See explanation for answer.
Explanation:
Tips:
Maybe instead of saying "ain't nothing I want more than your love" say "I want nothing more than your love" for a classier and more professional line.
I would reccommend taking out "you're a catipiller, you're becoming a beuatiful butterfly" because in my opinion it almost seems like your belittling the person you love. Try using a different metaphor.
"ill love you to the day that I die" should be "I'll love you till the day that I die" which I might also change because it sounds very similar to a line in the song "Piano Man" by Billy Joel. Just a tip.
When you say "love is all I need, love is all I want" maybe say "your love is all I need, your love is all I want"
Advice:
Try creating stanzas, it will help your poem look more finished.
Compliments:
I love the comparison "like roses you have thorns" and "like a bull I have horns" cause that's basically you admitting that you know neither of you are perfect.
I love your ending, it's very well thought out.
I hope I helped!
Have a lovely day!
You could make rules about being an overall good person. Not lying, not stealing, not cussing, being kind to one another, not talking sh*t about someone, and being true to yourself.
Answer:
first he was exicted and at the end he was sad no spoilers and what do tizzy mean stated on page 83 i think she means by a statment about something i took the test
Explanation:
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Complex sentence is formed by adding one or more subordinate (dependent) clauses to the main (independent) clause using conjunctions and/or relative pronouns.
Answer:
People would feel sympathy so that the people would read on. The reason they would feel sympathy is because they would think he is a innocent teenager being dragged towards his death.
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