The biggest issue with this is that the first sentence is run-on, you should consider breaking it into smaller sentences, maybe by getting rid of the "and" after describing the mother, replacing it with a period and letting the father get a sentence of his own. Also, you could try "-on how happy the Railway family is. The story also uses detail on how nice the parents are-" something along those lines, just to break the run-on sentence?
This is minor, but at the end "creates a sense of perfection, by describing their house-" the comma before by isn't necessary, and can either be deleted, or you can rephrase like "a sense of perfection. The story does this by describing-"
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Explanation:
anu said told me are you going to the darbar let me join you
Regarding race, religion, creed, and gender, I believe that the education system leaves no hurdles for the formerly discouraged sects of society. However, school districts that encapsulate both high and low wealth areas do little to provide proper educational assistance and opportunity to children of all surrounding home lives. Hope this helped!
<span>A. emphasize a point.
I think so becuase shes making a point by what she says.</span>
It might be C, since D isnt related to the topic, B is just one line from it, A is also not really related to the short story.
Im so so sorry if its wrong!
